A Composition Class Project

The following novel is written in installments by the thirteen members of the Bevier C-4 Composition Class. The story is arranged as a novel, so pay no attention to the dates of posting, but follow the tale to its close. As of January 21, we are starting the third of five scenarios for our thirteen characters. You may email or leave comments if you like, and we will be happy to respond if you wish. Enjoy!

Thursday, December 31, 2009

Renee Scenario V

When Avery and Renee were at the Times Square, Renee had met this guy that she thought was kind of cute named Brandon Tomson. He was a cute skinny, cowboy that liked to have fun. We hung out and talked for a while, and we thought to each other that maybe we were meant to be.
After a few months of hanging out, he asked, and Renee said, “Yes.”
Time then flew by. It was Christmas day, and Renee was spending the day with her boyfriend that she had for almost ten months and her family. As she was sitting there just waiting to go to her parents house, the phone rings.
Ring, Ring, Ring she answered, “Hello.”
Brandon replied, “Are you ready?”
She responded “Yes I am.”
Brandon then said “Alright, I am on my way over.”
Click, Renee hung the phone up.
Brandon arrived, and she opened the door. When she opened the door to Brandon, he got down on his knees and asked Renee, “Will you marry me?”
Renee responded while starting to cry “Yes, I will marry you.” As they had their little moment, they then headed to Renee’s parent’s house. When they got there, Renee showed her parents her big diamond ring that Brandon got her for Christmas. Her parents were proud. After their time of spending their day with her parents, Brandon then took her back home. The next day when she awoke, she was getting ready to go spend her day with Brandon and his family.

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